-Perses: Good energy to start…clear and understandable. Sustain it, friend! You’ve got it.
-All: Need mucho mas grunts, squeaks, knaps…battle sounds!
-Sisters: Louder behind the screen
-Connor: Be coming on for your transition AS Perses is leaving
-Connor/Dory: Keep pushing their reactions to each other, Chuck flirting, Agnes in disbelief
-Marissa: Great power entry!
-Katie: Don’t look back at Tilly on your entrance moment…straight out to the audience until ‘I’m in the mood for danger’
-Denizens/Intro Fight: Y’all should be coming full steam on the word ‘badasses’
-Dory: Are you afraid of Lilith? Respond accordingly…
-Adventurers: Good Sword reactions!
-Shae: Perfect reaction to your sister being an asshat!!!
-Aspen: Way to take the note about the staff…now don’t hold it upside down ;-)
-Ian: Way to match energy…really dynamic with the girls!
-Aspen: You’re late into Vera's office…
-LillyAnn: Don’t break your freeze until after the second ‘Vera’...and remember to freeze looking Stage Right (2nd note)
-Bugbears: That’s the stuff…grunts and battle sounds. Now go further!
-Katie: Projection good…slow down, tho
-Katie: Your basics are good…you’ve been working! Now stylize…find your inner aloof supermodel!
-Fighters: You can’t just stand and wait for your next move…justify the moments you’re not striking a death-blow
-Fighters: Why so quiet? Except for one or two, there’s no sounds happening…
-Savy: You have to get up with everyone else
-Katelyn: Better vocal rate! Now consistency is the key…there were a few moments of rapid-speak.
-Katelyn: Much more personality tonight…she's a real fairy-person. Nice!
-Ian: Don’t over play your fear of Farrah…it’s rushing a bit
-Katelyn/Aspen: You can leave as soon as they Adventurers hit the stairs
-Connor: Retreat straight back on the double-hand push from Orie
-Connor: Remember to talk TO people…Eye contact helps the audience know where to look
-Marissa/Shae: Angle your bodies more downstage on the arm-around
-Katie/Ian: Make eye contact with each other after ‘I need a timeout’
-Ian/Katie/Marissa: Sustain your characters’ actions all the way offstage
-Shae: Hear ‘Taking a nap’ before registering your alarm
-Eden: Keep your body engaged with holding Agnes…it does take some effort
-Ella/Shae/Eden: Build up the suspense a bit more as to whether the kiss is going to happen
-Marissa: Don’t rush your first Lily line…it is a bit hard to understand when Agnes is coming in so hot
-Dory: You started rushing quite a bit talking to Lily
-Marissa: Good job taking the note around the ‘Tilly’s sister’ stuff…it can be a longer beat before you break the silence
-LillyAnn: Good timing on the way through the door…now justify that entrance with something other than your first line.
-Connor: You need to be in your seat before you say your line about ‘You know I’m not her, right?’
-Katie: Get past the first flat before you notice Agnes sitting there
-Katie: Don’t get up for the near-kiss until just before Agnes is due to say ‘Chuck!’
-Adventurers: The ‘Fart knocker’ buildup and aftermath was well-built
-Dory: After the serpentine, don’t forget to be surprised by your own quality!
-Shae: Don’t jump right in after the Miles fight…Let Agnes have her heroine victorious moment
-Shae: Delay your post-Cheerleader entry just a beat
-All: Make sure to listen for laugh lines…they’re gonna happen
-Orie: Get further onstage before speaking going into the apartment
-Dory: Rushing again…
-Connor: Don’t fear Miles until after the ‘in the pants’ line
-Orie: Let’s practice with the belt and get a bit faster
-Ian/Orie: Find the flirt vs. midwestern straight guy dynamic just a bit more
-Fighters: Don’t anticipate the attacks…you shouldn’t block until you see the attacks coming
-Cheerleaders: Work out the idea of the dance fight…you’re skeptical, but you think you can take them
-Katie/Dory: We have to fill the gap between your dance sequences…it’s too long
-All: You need to react in character to the dance sequences. Are you impressed, impatient, afraid, excited…what?
-Cheerleaders: Delay your lines until the music is out.
-Connor: Leave your chair not-pushed-in
-All: No one moves until Tilly says ‘STOP’...and move offstage with more urgency (oh, and someone needs to grab the sword from the stage
-Orie: As you get up to reenter the real world, be taking your belt off and leave it with your sword
-Dory: Monologue is coming along well…you’re almost there
-LillyAnn: Way to match Agnes’ energy…work to match it physically
-Connor: You need to get all the way into the office
-Connor: Don’t pass the edge of the flat
-Ian/Katie: Come on a bit sooner
-Marissa: Really struggle with the reveal of her relationship with Tilly
-Dory: Work the knife throw…give it intent
-Dory: Turn upstage to see their ‘Where could the monsters be?’...turn downstage on ‘Tiamat…’
-Tiamat: We need to time the down jump…
-Fighters: Not bad on the fight…you remembered most!
-Dory: There needs to be an extra beat as you cradle Tilly to the ground
-Dory: Give Tilly your sword AND belt after the embrace
-Perses: Project!
Fight Notes:
opening fight-
shae- make sure you actually pull the sword out of jake’s stomach after stabbing him the second time so it looks like you’re actually pulling it from his body.
trio fight-
monsters enter quicker
shae- get a little closer to stab abby
bugbears-
GREAT vocalizations
sam, keep your torso upright, there’s no leaning in swordplay
jack- keep your active hand UP, it’s hanging there like a limp noodle
shae- we’ll work those moulinets
jack and dory- air in the head punch
jack- keep the head swipe horizontal, it dipped a bit low
russell- keep those shoulder cuts lower, aim for her shoulder
jack- get your ar for dory to stab you
montage fight-
marissa- it looks like you’re waiting for savy and trillium to enter
addison- great death
jack- vocalize more
jake- aim much lower on the shoulder cuts, it looked like you were aiming for above her head
katie- aim higher on the russell backstab, it looked like your blade went through his hip bones
ian- amazing
addison- BARBIE HANDS on that second death, you grabbed the blade which worried me
savy and abby- exit sooner, you were the last ones off
note for elodie- we need someone to get savy’s dagger to katelyn much sooner
farrah-
katelyn- shove needs windup, get closer and bend your arms
katelyn- knee to the groin needs more windup
katelyn and aspen- get up and leave the second the adventurers get off stage
cheerleaders 1-
shae- with the sheath, you can keep your hand on your sword to make sure it doesn’t drag on the rocks
eden/ella- great synchronization in the jump down
eden/shae- we’ll work the head to knee
all- dory kept a hand on her sword so it wouldn’t drag on the ground with the sheath. be like dory
miles/agnes fight-
orie- GREAT job with the scabbard, the unsheath felt really natural
orie- get a wider, deeper stance
dory- remember to put up a “pause” arm for “seriously you guys aren’t going to help me”
everyone who handles a rapier- go home and watch the inigo vs westley fight from
the princess bride
cheerleaders 2-
cheerleaders- make the heart rip two actions. reach in, pull out. remember that you’re going through his flesh, muscle, and bone.
shae- keep your torso upright, otherwise great
eden/marissa- work the contact punch, it looked weak. you need to get closer, have more windup, and you can hit harder
eden and ella- make sure you jerk to the side on the belly swipe
aspen- when taking off the broadsword, make sure you’re keeping it at your side
tiamat fight-
dory- faster up to the fifth party
dory- air in the pommel to marissa
aspen and dory- what happened with the stab?